I read a book Lorna Doone. It's a love story.The Doone's family was killers, bad men.They kill people and steal.John Ridd was a little boy when Doones kiled his father.And John promised to revenge Doones.When he went to the river to catch fish he met a little girl called Lorna Doone.He loved her. After 7 years they met again. Carver Doone killed John's father and now want to marry Lorna.John took Lorna to his farmwhen her gradfather died.They lived together.When John went to London he meet a very rich woman.Later Lorna came to live with this woman,because when she was baby Doones steal her at this woman. At the end of this story they become together, but on their wedding day Carver Doone nearly killed Lorna, she think that she died, but this story has a good and They married and lived all their lives together.
I want to tell you about the story of St. King. Than story is called "Cristin". I Think it`s a very sad story about friendship of two boys and girl. One day one of those boys, his name is Sam bought an old cat. It was eldorado 1963. That car was brooken. I Think that boy was in love with "Cristin" that was name of that eldorado. But, that car was like it alive. It killed people who fight with Sam. His friend saw it. They was shocked. Eventually, the car tried to kill these children... But in that sroty happy-end.
Charlotte Bronte's "Jane Eyre" This book is about Jane Eyre,about her life,her dream and her love story. Her story begins when she was ten. She was living with her aunt,Mrs Reed, because her mother and father were both dead. But she was unhappy with her aunt, that's why she arrived at Lowood School. She stayed at the school until she was eighteen and then she had to find a job. She wanted to become a teacher. After school she got a job with a family. She was a teacher for little girl Adele and worked for Mr Rochester.Jane Eyre loved him and she wanted to marry him. Mr Rochester wanted to marry her too. But they didn't get mirried. J.E. went away with this family. She was found new friends Diana, Mary and John. She was living with them. But she missed Mr Rochester and she arrived athis house. When he saw her he said will you marry me.She said "yes"! Mr Rochester and she were very happy together!
I read the book,which is called An Ideal Husband.This book is written by Oscar Wilde.This book is about an honest man.But he had an unpleasent secret from all the people,who new him.And only one woman knew this secret and she was very dishonest and she wanted to tell all the people about this secret.If he didn't do what she saked him.This man's name's Robert Chiltren.He had a wife who's don't knew this secret and they loved each other very much.But when Robert's wife knew this secret she wanted to leave him.But they had a friend Lord Goring who halped them and they again love each other .
I read a book Lorna Doone.
ОтветитьУдалитьIt's a love story.The Doone's family was killers, bad men.They kill people and steal.John Ridd was a little boy when Doones kiled his father.And John promised to revenge Doones.When he went to the river to catch fish he met a little girl called Lorna Doone.He loved her. After 7 years they met again. Carver Doone killed John's father and now want to marry Lorna.John took Lorna to his farmwhen her gradfather died.They lived together.When John went to London he meet a very rich woman.Later Lorna came to live with this woman,because when she was baby Doones steal her at this woman. At the end of this story they become together, but on their wedding day Carver Doone nearly killed Lorna, she think that she died, but this story has a good and They married and lived all their lives together.
Thank you, check the tenses. for example, your story is in the past and this sentence is in the present "They kill people and steal"
ОтветитьУдалитьI want to tell you about the story of St. King. Than story is called "Cristin".
ОтветитьУдалитьI Think it`s a very sad story about friendship of two boys and girl. One day one of those boys, his name is Sam bought an old cat. It was eldorado 1963. That car was brooken.
I Think that boy was in love with "Cristin" that was name of that eldorado.
But, that car was like it alive. It killed people who fight with Sam.
His friend saw it. They was shocked.
Eventually, the car tried to kill these children...
But in that sroty happy-end.
Charlotte Bronte's
ОтветитьУдалить"Jane Eyre"
This book is about Jane Eyre,about her life,her dream and her love story.
Her story begins when she was ten. She was living with her aunt,Mrs Reed, because her mother and father were both dead. But she was unhappy with her aunt, that's why she arrived at Lowood School. She stayed at the school until she was eighteen and then she had to find a job. She wanted to become a teacher.
After school she got a job with a family. She was a teacher for little girl Adele and worked for Mr Rochester.Jane Eyre loved him and she wanted to marry him. Mr Rochester wanted to marry her too. But they didn't get mirried.
J.E. went away with this family.
She was found new friends Diana, Mary and John. She was living with them. But she missed Mr Rochester and she arrived athis house. When he saw her he said will you marry me.She said "yes"!
Mr Rochester and she were very happy together!
I read the book,which is called An Ideal Husband.This book is written by Oscar Wilde.This book is about an honest man.But he had an unpleasent secret from all the people,who new him.And only one woman knew this secret and she was very dishonest and she wanted to tell all the people about this secret.If he didn't do what she saked him.This man's name's Robert Chiltren.He had a wife who's don't knew this secret and they loved each other very much.But when Robert's wife knew this secret she wanted to leave him.But they had a friend Lord Goring who halped them and they again love each other .
ОтветитьУдалитьSavako.Not.Sadako
ОтветитьУдалитьat first it was a cat and then i became a car :))
In the sentence "It killed people who fight with Sam" two tenses present and past
Karina, look at this sentence
ОтветитьУдалитьHe had a wife who's don't knew
tenses here... what's the correct way?
Natalie,
ОтветитьУдалитьcheck this sentence
She was found new friends